abby ([info]slam_the_breaks) wrote,
  • Music: jazz

i call this the 3:30am ditty/rhyme/wrap/poem...whatever the hell you want to call it.

I jammed my finger in the dresser drawer
The pain made me ponder: is this real or is there more?
Oh, inside I screamed like a ready tea pot
And I wondered if you would help me or not

Now to the next I continue as Mraz
Don't you worry, I haven't lost my pizzaz
Cuz seeing 2 z's in a row makes me hungry
This is turning out to be quite funny

Getting back to the lonely subject at hand
This won't require piano or even a band
It's the international sound that everyone hears
It's the sadness surrounding, that evokes our tears
But sometimes we have nothing there to cry
We can only express it in our wish to die
So let yourself feel, "surrender to this pose"
Stop smelling only the bitter, pick up the scent of a rose
Because it will be too late, aas time will tell,
You don't want your legacy label to be that you fell.

You may ask: what about it should I do?
That's up to you, or you know who
You do that which you do and you'll see what I mean,
That flowing assembly, that oiled machine.
That is your routine. It's beginning to break
So go with the change, for your life's own sake
Let a piece fall off and let it make a sound
The truth will develope and you will be found

So this is the end of my childish rhyme
I tried to write deep, but this is all I could find
Maybe if one finds something inside
It will benefit me , them, all along for the ride
That we happen to call life, but that's just a term
For the places we go, the things that we learn.
So take your own advice: live, be free
None of this really has to do with me.


i felt like writing, this is what i wrote. i should sleep but i cant. goodbye.

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[info]mission_visible

July 14 2005, 15:27:54 UTC 6 years ago

My dearest Abby,
you are such a great poet
and it makes me oh so happy
when you decide to show it.

the first part made me laugh
and the rest was just so deep
its time for me to go (momma says i gotta milk the calf)
and i'm hoping you're asleep.


Beatiful. Yours, not mine.
wow. i'm a loser. but are you psycho!!?? what the fuck were you doing STILL awake when i was just getting up to go to work?

[info]precipitate

July 14 2005, 23:37:19 UTC 6 years ago

jesus christ. this makes me proud.

[info]krsscutiegrl

July 15 2005, 03:43:37 UTC 6 years ago

FUCKING A Abby! that was ridiculously awesome. I love writing lyrics, and I must say the mraz pun was fukcing awesome.

[info]krsscutiegrl

July 15 2005, 03:45:03 UTC 6 years ago

99 problems and a bitch ain't one!

[info]slam_the_breaks

July 15 2005, 06:45:03 UTC 6 years ago

huh?

[info]krsscutiegrl

July 16 2005, 07:32:25 UTC 6 years ago

that was me rapping to jay z!!

Anonymous

July 21 2005, 17:31:30 UTC 6 years ago

encore! encore!

make me happy, damnit. EN-fucking-CORE!!

or at least an update would be nice :)

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